So, I wrote this last night. Inspiration is unclear still, but it seemed apropos considering it’s my birthday, even if it’s a little depressing. So much has happened in this year alone, I feel ninety instead of sixteen. New school, new city, new friends, LOVE (which wasn’t something I had to deal with at my last school). I promise at some point here I will get around to everyone’s pages. Recent personal happenings are keeping my schedule a little erratic.
Cheers from the new old lady 😉
There was a time so long ago
When my feet touched nothin’ but rainbow
I skipped
And I hopped
I ran
And I danced
Me myself and I
Needed no romance
The sky was blue
And the grass was green
Everything I had
Was all I could need
No worries
No pain
No cold hard truth
My worst hurt was when
I lost a baby tooth
Reality was too big
For my naive eyes to see
My world was so small
I bounced of its walls with glee
And my feet touched nothin’ but rainbow
Colors shimmered and scattered
With my every footfall
Dropping down like painted tears
Of course I thought they were only rain
Tears are for those who have experienced pain
That rainbow was once so wide
I had to run a mile to the other side
It slowly shrank
As I grew up
Until I was on tip toes
And then one day
POOF!
I fell down
Off my rainbow
Like a bird from its nest
It had just disappeared
And so childhood’s fog cleared
I knew not where to go
Having lost my compass of a rainbow
For a while I was lost
And I probably still am
It’s much harder to find one’s way
On crude, solid land
My pot of gold exists somewhere
And I’ll keep on looking
Even though life’s not always fair
Happy birthday, Andrea.
And so you know, it’s even better when you find the rainbow again later on.
Hope the year holds everything you hope for!
I LOVE that so much ANDREA 🙂 it describes what I feel to
Wishing you a very Happy Birthday! Also, I loved your poem! 🙂
Our birthdays seem to coincide. What a lovely poem, dear Andrea. Forgive me for being absent lately. Your skill has not diminished in my absence, obviously 🙂
Really? Well, Happy Birthday to you as well!!! Tis’ the day of poets, I suppose 😉
Andrea xx
A beautiful writing on the innocence we all one day lose
Congratulations on your birthday and never give up on chasing rainbows
Ian
Thank you!!
Hope you are well!!
Andrea xxxx
Tell you what, Treasure. This is probably the best piece of work I’ve read all day. I’ve had it up to here with naval gazing twaddle, yours is real. If there’s one more mention of disdain or vain or mirrors or what the hell else I will explode, yours is bloody real! Ok, not brilliant technically but who cares.
Now you’re a fully qualified member of the Old Bags Club you have a rep to keep up!
RR
16???? You’re still a baby, LOL! 😀 Just wait until you turn 50! Happy belated birthday! xx
Oh The poem is so beautiful..
Wish you a very Happy birthday
may you find more colours to tip toe on 🙂
Beautiful poem, I like it!
Happy Birthday, dear Andrea!
Francina xx
May rainbows always find you even when life splashes mud everywhere and a storm is brewing.
Beautiful, Andrea, and Happy belated Birthday and many wishes for many rainbows to come! (and if you’re old, I’m ancient 🙂 )
Hugs!
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OH! what can I say, that is such an amazing poem. You are such an amazing young woman… Happy Birthday sorry it is late ! Be happy learn life’s slowly and surely ! XX
Happy Birthday, lady!! 🙂 And remember – Growing old is mandatory, growing up is optional! 😛
Belated happy birthday, Andrea! Hope you had a wonderful day…full of love! That child in you need not be lost…let your tears still be rain knowing that the sun will shine again…and thus rainbows are created…and the treasures of living are still there as long as you believe.
I must add that I really love this poem…and even at my much older age, found something to calm and encourage me as my life changes yet again in ways I may not be able to control as I want. Thank you!
What a beautiful poem!
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Well…youth does pass but you have plenty left…and one day Love will put you back on top of the rainbow.
Beautiful!
Thanks!!
Andrea