So Very Right

18 12 2011

Under a shimmering blanket of stars

We lie and wait as time goes by

Away from the noise, the bustle, the cars

This singular simplicity making us high

I know I am not yet in love

Love is something forged by time

For now it is enough to know that you are mine

Our thoughts of us still pure as a dove

My soul is soaring like a kite

Carried away by the sweet air of tonight

The words unsaid and bond formed someday just might

Create a love so very right

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14 responses

18 12 2011
willowdot21

pure and innocent first love under the stars on a blanket the noise and and world a distant blur. xx

19 12 2011
catcherofstars

It’s a wonderful feeling “Just a picture perfect day that lasts a whole life time and it never ends ’cause all we have to do is hit rewind” That’s from the song Young Forever by Jay-Z and Mr. Hudson.
AZ

18 12 2011
aussieian2011

A beautiful romantic writing , nostalgic dreamings
Enjoyed that scenario you have painted
May all your dreams and love come true
Ian

19 12 2011
catcherofstars

Thank you, Ian! I hope so too……..
AZ

18 12 2011
bardessdmdenton

Your writing is so mature and wise. This is beautifully formed and worded. A wonderful tribute to what love is really about. A sense of the sacred even as it manifests in the physical…

‘I know I am not yet in love

Love is something forged by time

For now it is enough to know that you are mine

Our thoughts of us still pure as a dove’

19 12 2011
catcherofstars

Thank you! I think I am more mature than most people my age, so my views on love are usually a little more cautious than my contemporaries, which has its benefits and drawbacks.
AZ

21 12 2011
bardessdmdenton

I was much the same when I was your age…and you are right that it has its benefits and drawbacks. But in the long term I believe I used my time…much of it learning and writing and exploring my purpose…much better than alot of my peers then.

I still ‘dance to my own drummer’ and although it is easier, still not without its difficult moments. But writing is the safety net…and even more, it is a blessing.

And sharing, I think, makes it even more so.

19 12 2011
A Pakistani Boy

Its soooo sweet and cute!!!!!!!!!! I love it! ❤

19 12 2011
catcherofstars

Thank you! I tried to write about budding love in a new way.
AZ

19 12 2011
Step On a Crack

This is a beautifully written poem! You capture those precious early moments of Loves Blossoming perfectly. It seems to me you must be falling in love now; this instant

To have captured the tenderness so well it must be fresh. You are gifted. Thank you for sharing your work.

Peace, Jen

19 12 2011
catcherofstars

Thank you, and I’m falling quite hard….I hope my parachute is working:)
AZ

20 12 2011
lscotthoughts

So beautiful and romantic! Love this one!

21 12 2011
MikeP

Now thats a beautiful poem. The more I am exposed to your poetry the more the troubles of the day…. disappear. Thanks AZ

21 12 2011
catcherofstars

No problem, Mike. The more I see your amazing pictures the more I am inspired to view the world from new perspectives.
AZ

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